Above this, is my first draft of my magazine, 'VIVA'. So far this is how I want my magazine to come across. My peers have given me feedback suggesting that I should have changed the title's font colour into something that would still grab the readers attention from afar. Moreover they liked the style of the magazine although they suggested I could have added more on the right side of the magazine. Most importantly, from the feedback it is evident there are minor changes to be made although this is just a first draft.
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